Me. It did not take me out of the reading experience that much, but I felt that maybe the . . Thanks for the review, I think I can skip reading this one. There doesn't seem to be much . premise has a lot of potential to be a satisfying read, but it's too short, too disorganized, and to . a shame that the errors made it "unbearable" to read. Great review! Wow! All the grammatical errors sound like . cheap. Thanks for commenting! This definitely was not a satisfying read. I wish it had a good editor go through . Jake is appealing to me. However, I will only read this book when it is well-edited. A 15 . minute read? I know it’s aimed at young adults, but they. that a 10-year-old would be satisfied with a fifteen-minute read. I think that this version might have .